All Comments on 'Evasion'

to be a "little" realistic and VERY humorous! Good One!

I was disappointed with this story but it is the first of your stories I’ve read. I decided to search for spy stories and this was one of them to pop up. The good news is most of the spy stories I’ve read up to now have been a similar standard to this one. The bad news is I felt it plodded along, had no excitement which is what you expect from a spy story, and long before the ending I didn’t care how it ended. But it does seem that, generally, your fetish stories don’t seem to do well so perhaps it isn’t your forte. I’ll read Great Rite next because it was written around the same time as Evasion, has a higher rating, and because I like Romance.