All Comments on 'Even Better Than The Real Thing'

...lets down an otherwise great story that shows how sluts who go to pubs without a man desrev to be treated.

I enjoyed this! It is well written, and the rape scene did turn me off, but the ending made it fine!

Wonderful job!

I really liked the twist at the end. Not bad, not bad at all! :)

Ah! you're such a bad girl, Janie! I was getting turned off, too, by the rape - then the twist in the tail changed the whole concept!

Luke

I was all confused till the director yelled cut. You made me laugh out loud. Thanks.

I liked the surprise ending.

As I was reading it I felt like the story wasn't coming together, then the movie set ending tied up the loose ends.

Well Janie, I was really worried by the time you got to the rape but then you twisted the whole thing around and gave us a truly great, humorous ending. Again your superb command of the English language caused a frisson of desire LOL! Don’t worry about the first ‘anonymous comment’ - it probably came from a guy who can only get the girls by raping them.

Laura accepts a drink from a good looking guy in a busy club in London. Wary of strangers she later makes her way home only to be confronted by the same guy. The suspense continues to build unabated. The ending was a blockbuster. Wonderful Author. A Great Read!

You're a great writer, and I follow your work, but I think this one doesn't work -- you played the rape bit a little too hard. I felt really nervous and actually skipped to the end to find the twist I expected. But then, what do I know?

Janie

Caught the reader looking the other way on that one didn't you. Good read, though as a police officer I've had to interview a number of women who have been victimised this way, and I have never had one of them ever say that they began to enjoy it (just another male fantasy to go with the rest that we read on here)