All Comments on 'Even the Stars Fall 4 U'

This is... Odd. I normally find your stories extremely erotic, especially your mind control ones, but this just didn't do it for me...

Well, I will eagerly await the next, Jukebox.

This was fantastic! Fractionated, obedient, enslaved perfection. And what I have been pondering upon all week: is there any difference between an obedient whore and an obedient soldier? In terms of submission, that is. Engagingly written, as always.

I was turned on as soon as the fractionation started. But that's just because I always get turned on when I go into trance.