All Comments on 'Evening'

Great story. Well-written and subtle in all the right ways. The characters really came through in such a brief period of time. If you have more of story I would love to keep reading.

Please continue the story! It is a joy to read and I'm getting hooked on the characters!

Very well written. Loved it!

It is a pleasure to read a short story where the characters leave you wanting to know more. Please consider continuing this story.

AVE GLORIOSA IN NOMINE AVOLITION!

I read your story and got very hard.Then i ran the story thru my mind as I looked at your pic.I instantly imagined licking you and came all over my hand! It tasted great!!

Delicious tight writing which allows us into the characters as well as into their beautiful sex.

Extraordinary writing for one so young. Congratulations.

I would love to know what happens next in this story!! Please continue!!