All Comments on 'Evening at the Beach'

BiBob, this must be partially or totally autobiographical - it's one of the most stimu= lating sexually focused stories I've read here. You're an exceptional writer which rreally draws the reader completely into the narrative emotionally as well as physically. I'm hopeful that you'll add to the latter events that transpired in Florida or Colorado; there have to be some other incidents that really belong in a chapter 2 or

3. Thanks for the story you've shared so far.

That was one of the sweetest most erotic stories I've ever read on here. I hope you do another part to this one. I'd love to read it. Thanks for sharing.

Lucinda

Loved your story, but I think its a lot more than a story. It doesn't call for another chapter. A warm loving story and the ending is exactly like a lot of our life experiences. We move on and can only hope one day find

another like him.

No new chapters, incredible love story, you must of been devastated when he moved.

All your story needed (for me) was to have him sensually suck Dan's cute toes!

Beautiful story.

The description of these men fucking in a near-transcendent state is something I can understand. As soon as my penis was buried in my lover's ass and my legs got into place outside his, we could tell we fit together perfectly. A rhythm seemed to set itself in motion without our trying -- we just rocked and rolled along with it. His prostate area felt like it kissed the head of my cock with each thrust; after I finally came sperm kept washing over my cockhead like surf breaking on a beach.

Exceptionally well writen. Sensual and loving descriptions which indicates to me that at least part of it is true. Well done! I had a similar relationship with my partner for over 25 years. I lost him to cancer a little over two years ago and miss him so much. I still love to read the Literotica articles and masturbate to the stories and comments.