All Comments on 'Ever play "Sex chicken"?'

Some people have a gift for writing. Others are at the polar opposite end of the spectrum. You're at the "far end" of not talented. This "story" was bad on way too many levels to even bother getting started dissecting it.

This story was a fun, quick read. My only sorrow is that too many people do not "follow through" the same way that Hilary and "Austin Powers" did.

Keep the Life going

The comment about you not being talented was not warranted. I have no idea what, if anything, was going through their head when making it. I ascribe to the KISS principle. Keep It Simple Stupid. Frequently authors feel they need to give so much background and "filler" information that it really just takes away from what the author is trying to express. It is so much harder to write a short story and be concise in what you include. You did a superb job !! Great descriptions. Loved the way each responded to the other. These type of marriages stay fresh and last. A-4.😊😊😊😊