All Comments on 'Ever the Caterpillar'

Even though it's probably not classed as erotica, I love the way you write! I really like the voice you use to write with, and how much it mirrors the voice in my own head about these kinds of things. I could totatlly identify with feeling uninitiated and 'vanilla' when confronted with all the stuff out there, even though when I think about it I'm not. And feeling daunted by going into adult stores even when I have no real reason to be daunted... Thanks for this. It was totally what I needed to read!

Jodie had fantasised about sucking two big cocks at the sametime. The sensation of her lips stretched around two thick cock shafts, while her hungry tongue flicked over the vast purple cockheads made her pussy itch with desire.She had seen this so many times in porn films,young sluts gobbling two monster cocks at the same time.Grinning as cum spurted from both enormous penises straight into her eager mouth.Thick jets of sperm squirting from each oversize helmet .