All Comments on 'Everdale Ch. 01: Immorality and Earth'

by ScarletDusk

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A Son would have completed ...

A son would have completed the family foursome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WTF?!

This was a prety decent story until the wake up on another planet crap. Put it in sci-fi. Weird shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Decent writing.

I think I would actually like to read something of yours that didn’t have explicit sex in it. I think your sex scenes actually bog down the flow of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Incest?

Why incest? So darned little of it. Not bad otherwise.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All families should experience such uninhibited love

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