All Comments on 'Every Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great beginning!!

I hope there's a part two!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Me too

I too would like the story continued.

chilleywilleychilleywilleyabout 11 years ago
Hmmm!

When a dog drops a stick at your feet, to please the dog you have to throw it. It's the chase they like, not tHe stick itself.

You dropped the pussy at his feet, which is not as interesting to read about as the chase.

Chilled

HarleyGuy228HarleyGuy228about 11 years ago
More

I hope this isn just the first part of the story.

NickFoxxNickFoxxabout 11 years agoAuthor
More to come!

This is just the beginning. I'm working on three different erotica story lines right now and this is just starting to grow. It's based on a situation that fell in my lap so I'm trying to find how to best spin the tale. So far, it's just the tease...can't leave it there.

Look for more soon.

moneymadmisskmoneymadmisskabout 11 years ago
not really a tease

Its a cool story but she gave it to him way too easy to be considered a tease

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