All Comments on 'Everyone Knows But Them Ch. 03'

aargh more please! Love it but chapters soo short

Please post the next chapter soon

Please don't make us wait too long. I'm begging you...

And I'm not talking about in the story either. You are a good writer, and this is a wonderful tale. It has everything that makes life real. Sometimes relationships aren't neat and tidy. Please continue.

Such deliciously, dreamy, decadent drama. Can't wait for more.

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Really great story.

Plenty of Drama and Frustration all around. I wonder now Peter is feeling. I was hoping that he and Victor could hit it off.

keep posting please! i really like your stories

I need to know what happens next!!

I liked this chapter best of the 3 so far. I can't wait to see how this turns out!

please finish the story i want to know the end.

As a writer myself, i hateleaving people hanging on. Please PLEASE PLEASE finish this for us....

DeamonChild....

Really good but wheres the rest

This story started out okay. BUT there was too much whiny teenagey angst. These are supposed to be full grown men not some whiny bunch of teenagers. Everything just went from zero to sixty in about two paragraphs. I got so confused on some parts. Some people said it was hot but I think it was boring. And I read ALOT both on and off Lit. Most of the stuff I read on Lit is m/m and I've to where I can pick out a good one and this really doesn't even compare to even some of the more lacking stories.

Finish this! I actually really enjoy this story and would hate it if i never knew the ending... SO PLEASE FINISH IT!!!

You are an evil fucking bastard for not having finished it. However, I do love a pregnant pause, and the long days ahead (quite long as I see it's been 3 years since you updated this) will fill the future gap of this story's conclusion with my own dreampt of conclusion.

Thank you so much for having written as far as you did. This story is a treasure. Perhaps even in the direction that all of us can simply dream of how we'd wish it to end.

Regardless of if you finish it sometime (and I'd cherish that quite a bit), it's been a gorgeous display of loving evolution.

If anyone looks at the authors biography there is this at the bottom.

"I'm afraid to announce that S.J. was killed February 19th of the year in a car accident. Her stories, letters, books and memories that were shared with you all will forever be her legacy."

An idea occurred to me, and I am considering an attempt to pick this up and write Ch 4. Maybe someone more qualified and experienced might answer the challenge?

This is to good not to finish! I do not know how a grown man do not know if he is bi or gay or whatever. What is he doing? If I was Julian I would run for the hills quick fast and in a hurry. For someone that can't keep his mind of Julian he is doing a pretty good job by agreeing to see Peter later in the week. That is not the way to resolve anything with Julian. Work to resolve one issue at a time. Poor Julian. Maybe something will work out with Derek and Peter. This has a really good storyline. Please finish.

Please do more I'm dying for more! please!

Were is the rest of the story? I need more!!!!!