All Comments on 'Eve's House Pt. 01'

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chimpeechimpeeabout 10 years ago
GREAT START

Good opener this could go many ways bring on Chapter 2 what a wicked dominating woman Eve is her word is her command

Bob_AganoushBob_Aganoushabout 10 years ago
yes, good start

Lots of possibilities of where this story can go, I'll look forward to reading more

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