by BSBosworth
Descriptive, straight ahead, linear story telling; literate and well done. I'll go read your other stuff. The romantic in me wants the two exs to get back together. (BTW, many anonymous replies have contained the same "wanker" message lately. I think the psychologists call what this person is doing "projection".)
...I should be sorry to think that all stories on this site were not written by wankers.
The pejorative nature of the word 'wanker' is lost somewhat in crossing the pond. But I expect that someone who spends enough time reading stories on this site that they feel the need to comment on them would likely own a share or two of Tenga. Else why read here. The libraries are filled with literature. We're just spinning fantasies for our own enjoyment. It's only rock and roll but...
For a one-pager. Packed a lot in.
So I gave it 5 stars.
Paul in Oklahoma
Good story. I can see something like this happening, even to me, but I don't trust my ex enough to let this happen. Maybe in five or six more years haha.