by Relinquish
Good first effort. I've always enjoyed this setting and I like the premise you start out with as well as your characters.
A little short, but I suppose you have to start somewhere... Beyond that "a little short" is always a complaint I have for stories I like.
Go on, get to writing!
The sexual tension in the room is palpable, great writing. Going to look for part 2
Thank you for your supportive words and encouragement... Hope you enjoy this next segment... 😉