by mary_is_hot
I thought you came up with a good idea but perhaps needed to build the tension a bit more. Maybe add some things about the emotions she must have been feeling, her motivation to exhibit herself. Overall, a good first story. Welcome to lit. - Chip King
But it should have been 3 or 4 times as long so you could go into more detail. It would have been scrumptious!
My husband and I like to role play. I like to ride around with no top on with my 34 c cup out for all to see. I love all the looks I get. My husband is always with me. We just want to have fun