by HeyAll
Like how this builds, hope there's more of these two sexy women
Enjoyed this story and the fun the characters were having. Nice use of flashbacks.
Nice story. I really liked that the first sexual encounter was written as a memory brought on by the photos. That was a nice touch.
Does it haaaaave to be the end?
I'd love to 'watch' them on the rooftop, with the lifeguard and/or the neighbor!
Keep it up!
Really enjoyed your style and the way you just seem to flow into their sexuality! Waiting for more......................!
Really looking forward to more of this story, it's warming up very nicely :)
Very nicely written! I enjoyed the dialog between the women, and I especially liked the reluctance, and then growing enjoyment of her nudity and sexuality, that Courtney went through.
As an idea, it would be fun to read about Courtney bringing Jeff through a process like Gianni did for her, and watch his fear--reluctance--enthusiasm grow like Courtney ' s did.
Pardon the terse comment- still only have one hand available for typing
Courtney's journey is certainly as case where more is almost enough
HeyAll, this was such a hot story, and the characters have such a good chemistry with each other. Please do continue this story…
Not only was this so hot to read, but the plot and the characters were so well developed in such a short time! Your writing style is very fun and light, and you piqued my interest veeerrry well.
Wow, I hope this is only the beginning of a series. It would be alluring, sensual and you have only started to tell their story. Wonderful trurobeachcomber@yahoo.com
Nicly constucted story there is a subtleness in the characters that is so working.
Woman on woman stories usually don't really do it for me but this one was so erotic that I couldn't put it down. I was very hard reading it.
What a wonderful story, I can't believe how all your stories turn me on, no matter what combination of sexes. Your writings are so good
a voyage of self discovery and letting go,, well written, very erotic,, inventive story line, loved it.
.... Exhibition. So hot reading this. My fantasies come to life.
Great story! I would have really enjoyed reading about their first encounter together vs. almost hearing about it from memory. I’m all about foreplay and how characters sort of dance towards their encounters and I think it would make this an even better story!
Excellent story. I'm hoping there may be more public exposure by Courtney to read about in future.
It was erotic. Exhilarating. A real rush.
Not read your stories previously, but like your subjects I expect to be back for more.
Enjoyed your exhibitionists - can see the thrills so where is my camera. Thanks
It was so much fun to see Courtney come to understand that final truth: that she is an exhibitionist. It's also provided her with lots of fun and great orgasms.
I'm kind of curious where her journey will take her, but I'm reminded of a line from a House episode: One day, one room. You give us a glimpse at a moment in a life, so I'll just enjoy what we get. Thanks.