All Comments on 'Expanding Horizons Ch. 02'

Sexy, beautiful and erotic, we all imagine what would happen if we reconnected with those hot ones from our past, and your writings express and those imaginings...

Looking forward to the rest

How sweet the memories, like foreplay, leading us, teasing us. now for the real deal!

You make their first sexual experience so sweet. There should be a law that says all young women should lose the virginity to a guy who knows what he's doing. I personally volunteer to head the licensing department for these experienced young men hehe-he. The lack of awkwardness made Keira's first time seem more real rather than horseplay like most first time experiences. So what happens when they finally meet again? Will either of them find what they are each looking for? I hope Keira finds happiness when all is said and done.

This is one of the best "first time" stories I've read in a long time. Thanks for taking the time to make it so "real" for us.

A nice well written and smoothly paced story,

As a guy, being able to translate words to images is part of the turn on. You do a fabulous job making your characters real and plausible. And you describe blow jobs beautifully!!!

its now one of my favorite stories i've read on here, keep writing!

and sweet. I love how I feel like I know both of these people.

Having read more stories on literotica, I am more amazed by your writing skills than ever. It's wonderful to read your dialog and descriptions. And the sex!!!! Man can you describe sex! I feel like 'borrowing' some of your descriptions because they're so fucking hot and unique! Love it and love you!

Cb

but it was sensual, satisfying and smooth...Thanks for that..

As a former unrequited CIT.

Romance story telling at its finest. In addition to a great storyline, we have here great writing and characters that hold the interest of the reader from start to finish. The beautifully written love scene is icing on the cake. Five stars.