All Comments on 'Expect the Unexpected'

this was very sensual and feeling evoking. Much more than the typical run of the mill sloppy first time stories. As a curious girl this stories conjured up fantasies I never knew I wanted. It would be great it there was a part two of this story. Very well written and descriptive.

Your characters are likeable and their sex believable ...

This story has good background, buildup, excitement, personal fears, and a most excellent ending. Thanks so much for sharing your words!

Very nicely handled and believable.

I've been having thoughts about other girls for awhile. This story is AMAZING! I got so wet reading it. Thank you!!

The only thing that would have made it hotter (at least for me) was to have them actually speaking to one another. Your narration was good, but I was yearning for them to speak. Good job with this story. I hope you write more.

Wow, very erotic and lovely story! thank you for sharing it with us!