All Comments on 'Experience Ch. 02'

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bruce1971bruce1971almost 12 years ago
Outstanding!

A realistic narrative voice, a slow build, and lots of great description. I'd like to see Rita developed a bit more, but that's a pretty minor critique. Overall, an outstanding story!

cricketxcricketxover 10 years ago
Liked it - keep writing, please

You have a way with words! Very good story. Somewhere in page 2 Rita comes out and says: "I want you to be my lover." .... I was really hoping for some more build up and some tit for tat type stuff to go on for a while before they threw in the towel and got down to business. Very good story. Please keep it running!

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
good story

nice romantic, with hot sex, story about 2 nice people- well-written, thanks

mangydawgmangydawgover 10 years ago

Very, very good. Dialogue was believable, sequence of events were natural, and I liked these characters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Superb

Very worthy to follow this series. A perfect MILF story of the lady leading the guy and providing outstanding sexual tutelage. Great horny descriptions in a story all young men dream about.

More please. Loved it. Thanks

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