by NeonBlack169
A realistic narrative voice, a slow build, and lots of great description. I'd like to see Rita developed a bit more, but that's a pretty minor critique. Overall, an outstanding story!
You have a way with words! Very good story. Somewhere in page 2 Rita comes out and says: "I want you to be my lover." .... I was really hoping for some more build up and some tit for tat type stuff to go on for a while before they threw in the towel and got down to business. Very good story. Please keep it running!
nice romantic, with hot sex, story about 2 nice people- well-written, thanks
Very, very good. Dialogue was believable, sequence of events were natural, and I liked these characters.
Very worthy to follow this series. A perfect MILF story of the lady leading the guy and providing outstanding sexual tutelage. Great horny descriptions in a story all young men dream about.
More please. Loved it. Thanks