by JayBerry
Utterly believable and well-expressed. Called to mind more than one encounter we've had.
If I have luck in life I'll get to experience the freedom we all should have.. nice story.
It's always interesting to hear of other people's experiences. Thank you for sharing yours with us.
4*'s Interesting story. I liked it, fun read, reminds me of a time around 40yrs ago.
I am not nick-picking your story,but, it did need some editing. You weren't enjoying a toke or two when you wrote were you? ( joking of course) You needed to drop some of the parenthesis maybe use those lines as a one line paragraph. We seniors may have a lot to tell or incriminate ourselves with. :)) You have been add to favorites. :)
This is my idea of what the 1960s were like. Go for it! Loved the story; it was like a painting of the time period. 5* ~~JB Edwards