All Comments on 'Experiences at the Surgery Pt. 04'

by JaneBirch

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CroonyCroonyover 6 years ago
Thank you

Excellent as always Jane

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Just some Constructive Criticism

This, so far... isn't bad, but could sharpen up Marion and the Mc's relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Continue The Story of Jane & Marion!

Super read thus far, hopefully you'll continue the very erotic tale of Jane's submission at the hands of both Marion & Solange. Looking forward to Chapter 5 - and possibly even more!

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