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All Comments on 'Expirement Gone Wrong'

by Master_Vassago

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Lovely Sci-Fi/Horror

A fast-paced tale in the tradition of classic horror movies. Nice work Vassago!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
rushed and lack of professionalism

Why is it so hard to get people to check their stories for proper grammar and spelling?

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 15 years ago
Oh dear...

I believe the title of the story had a typo. Can't be good for the rest of the story. Please get an editor or at least someone else to read it. Spellcheck isn't a god.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

everybody needs to realise that none of us are perfect but i personally loved it. short and sweet is perfect for bedtime

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