All Comments on 'Exposure Compensation Factor Ch. 02'

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sanser6sanser6almost 9 years ago
I liked it. Very much

...and hope to hear more. Very likeable characters. Horny, likeable characters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Well ...,

Well ... Very well, and done up right !!! And, balanced, too! Your descriptions of the 'model', as seen by the photographer, were a definite bonus. TY

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsalmost 9 years ago
like it

And I won't complain at all if you write more about these two.

liquid_yellowliquid_yellowover 8 years ago

Great premise which deserves more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it

I really hope you write more about these characters. I'd love to see how things progress for them

JAUNTYOLDONEJAUNTYOLDONEover 8 years ago
Up till now !!!

Great story. Up till now the best put down was "no thanks I already have one asshole in my pants" but your " "how about class, charm, money, talent...and me!" trumps it.

Thanks for a very good read. !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fantastic

I love this tale

Wayfarer223Wayfarer223over 8 years ago
love this story!

please keep it going.

harristharristover 8 years ago
Definitely Enjoyed It

A great follow up to the first chapter. Not in regards to the sex, the first chapter has this one beat all to hell on the sex. But, the burgeoning relationship is very nice. Thank you

sirelcsirelcover 8 years ago
Enjoyable

I like the characters you write.

Many time it's seems like this character is a guy or gal because the writer says so.

The characters feel more real.

They feel feminine or masculine as Im reading.

A not too common thing.

Keep up the good work.

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2over 8 years ago
I rate 6 Stars ...

I Can rate my choices higher because I rate You as the first Star, a shining star among authors. Your characters have feelings and integrity. Even the barroom bully who knew when to back down. Definitely will entertain for years to come. OK ... Decades and eons.

roveroneroveroneabout 8 years ago
SUPERB Chapter 2!!

Really like these characters, and actually characters in all your stories I've read so far!

AND there's even a 3rd chapter for these 2...!

You seem to have an intimate knowledge of this biz....

roveroneroveroneabout 8 years ago
PS

I believe Cindy just hit 60, and she has got amazing genes..!

MarshallaMarshallaover 7 years ago
Over the top!

This one was the best yet!

I think I've made my opinion of the stories of yours that I've read as clear as I possibly can with the comments I've left, but "... best yet" is all I can think of for this story.

I'm just tongue tied!

And as has already been said, her reply to the "ring leader" was absolutely out-fucking-standing!

Brought back a memory of a young lady I was leaving an establishment with, replying to a similar question with, "He's a Sweetheart. He's not just trying to get into my pants. But that doesn't mean he's not going to."

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great

Again, your technical content supports a great story.

Black_MusingsBlack_Musingsover 5 years ago
Fantastic work!

I really enjoy the technical aspects of the story; it almost makes me want to try my hand at learning photography.

And of course, your characters are so damn likable. And the sex is hot, of course. :p

vonLassenvonLassenover 5 years ago
My nervous fingers on the keyboard.

I'm so sorry. It should have been 5 stars, but my fumbling fingers hit only 2 stars.

Very very sorry :-( :-(

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

GREAT story!!

ehppmsehppms2 months ago

Enjoying how this story has unfolded so far, will now check out the next chapter.

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