by emily_hughs
I like it and will continue to read. The build up is good. Worth a mention denim jacket to match denim shorts is a fashion faux pa. Double denim is not good here.
Since the body of the story is pretty free of typographical errors, I'm wouldn't be so upset about the title. Especially since it appears to fall into the realm of attention-getting advertising or promotion.
If you can't even spell the title of your story correctly, why should I bother to read anything else? ECSTASY!!!
This is just the sort of story that appeals to my dirty imagination. Maybe I need some help in this department, too...