by Contrasting
I feel punch drunk and drained.... and I just can't stay hard and excited as long as sonny can.... guess I need to learn to read a lot faster
Unbelievable. So many adjectives I need to express.
Way to wrap up ends and bring out other roads to travel.
can't wait for next chapter. Getting working! Lol!
during this epic, but the "not D. Debra, either so back off." is by far the funniest.
I see that you still have lots of issues to resolve before this is done. Please keep at least half an eye on working towards the next chapter. I may not have many more years to wait for this to continue to the end...
Excellent story, but a number of loose ends need to be sorted.
1. The "blisters" getting Airtight?
2. Does Sean get his mother?
3. Dee Dee does she get Airtight?
Keep the story going
Gotta like a good orgy story, but i still hope D hamilton gets fucked over my Sonny and I don't mean sexually
Good orgy story here. Lots of Girl/Girl too. The ONLY problem is the logic of good ol Sonny ejaculating 4 times in a very short time, not enough for a rest of his balls.
I've ejaculated 5 times in one day, but it took 7 hours to do it.
Sonny DOES have a lot of one liners, but beware his high-and-mighty attitude.
Take this as constructive criticism . I am enjoying the series but I am still unconvinced that your descriptions show a knowledge of the difference between the G spot and the clitoris. Often the description of the clit is geographically varied and gets described as having “a patch of rough skin”. Also, our hero seems to often find the G spot with unerring accuracy, with his tongue !! I wish my tongue was as long as that.