All Comments on 'Extinguished'

This was very nice, smooth narration and believable people. I'd like to see more!

Loved your writing of this hot story. Looking forward to reading more from you.

This was one of the best stories I've read here in awhile. Filled with believable characters, believable storyline and tender in the way it was told. I loved it! Please keep on writing.

I found humor in this story and enjoyed the storyline and the sex.

VERY well written...

Beautiful and sexy. I like the personal aspect here; I actually felt like I could relate to both main characters. While I don't condone sex outside of marriage, I'm obviously on this site looking for non-disgusting erotica to spice up my married sex. I found both excitement and true romance. If married people took a few calculated, naughty risks more often, there would be far less infidelity; it's God-created and healthy. I think I'm going to lure my amazing, sexy husband into a little beach side trap this summer when we visit his family back home in Florida. ;). This is great writing that turned me on, without making me nauseated!