All Comments on 'Extra Credit: 1st Experience Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Grammar

The content is awesome and you write exceptionally well. But your exceedingly long and run-on sentences detract from the overall efect!!

thebug37thebug37almost 9 years ago
Great

Keep writing these stories.

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