All Comments on 'Extra Money'

by lynm35

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
More of the story needed

Yep I liked the basis of your story...it was going along nicely but unfortunately ended just when it was getting somewhere...please give us the second part soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great, but need more

I liked the pace of your story until the end... Was it about to become a rape scene? Was it about to become forced petting? What is going on? We need a part II.

ErotonautErotonautover 15 years ago
Pity

Started well, then completely derailed itself with a stupid rape sequence. What a waste.

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