by lynm35
Yep I liked the basis of your story...it was going along nicely but unfortunately ended just when it was getting somewhere...please give us the second part soon!
I liked the pace of your story until the end... Was it about to become a rape scene? Was it about to become forced petting? What is going on? We need a part II.
Started well, then completely derailed itself with a stupid rape sequence. What a waste.