by LadyCypris
i liked your story. the story feels a bit like you are scared to actually embrace how the woman is feeling. i wanted to know how she felt to be used [to give over the power]. you set the character up as having a high sex drive and willing to play with herself in a public toilet. so it seemed out of character that it was unclear whether she was enjoying her submissiveness; why not tell us explicitly how her domination by the guard affected her sexual desires? please keep writing and exploring your imagination for us; you obviously recognise the enticements of sexual power.
I loved your storyu - i jacked off too it. MMM
The ending could have been a little more drawn out... but hey- i came HARRRRRRRRRD!!! all over your face baby!!!
I thought you expressed her feelings well. Of course some like a certain word or phrase to be used, like humiliaition or tightly bound, etc. Good story, it kept me reading to the end.