All Comments on 'Eye of the Beholder Ch. 02'

Long story short, Lit reposted chapter 1 and labelled it chapter 2. I don't really know how or why, but I'm sure you're annoyed just like I am.

In the meantime, head over to my blog (link is in my profile description). I have Chapter 2 posted there.

I'm so sorry for the inconvenience, guys.

RaLa

For those who don't feel like going to my profile description (LOL I can be lazy too) here's the address:

ralawrites.wordpress.com

Even the Literotica comment section has trolls?! Ugh! And by the way, the main female character is a black woman.

I think they posted this Ch.1 as Ch2.. Sucks I really wanted to read the second part

OMG I'm so addictive to This story... Thank you for noticing the mistake of this website and posting it on your blog. 5 stars all the way and I can't wait til the next installment.

Great Story!! Read it on your blogg. UPDATE SOON!!!

The REAL ch.2 is great! Thanx 4 letting us kno where 2 find it! For those w/patience, it's worth the wait!

Well his girl is a nympho, should she tell him no. Ole girl just by her insatiability to keep her "whoremones" under control in a small town will tell on herself. I am wondering outloud will her ex-boyfriend track her down anytime soon???? Her employer has his own regrets of not doing more as a child to protect his mom. Just wonderin what more is he willing to do to ease his conscience??

Why does this site keep posting the first chapter over and over again. I love this story and how it's growing. So I hope they start getting their stuff correct soon. Although it's good knowing one can simply go to your blog to read the next chapters.

Your guess is as good as mine. This is ridiculous.

I put in a request to have them remove it completely and I'll try to re-submit the real chapter 2. If not I'll have to post the rest of the story and all future series exclusively on my blog.

you mentioned finding another website to post your story. www.valentchamber.com is a great place to post your stories. Shows up immediately and I've noticed writers from literotica that go on there like sercretfantasy69 one of my fav authors.

I had a feeling that when Sarah told Barret she had to go to the office. I knew something was up. But great chapter on your blog.

Thank you for the blog address! I think Hartnett is a great face for the story, but with a body more like Clint Walker or Woody Strode, both from back in the day, or Jay Tavare (mixed American Indian and Spanish with an amazing body). These guys all have bodies that look like they've been tossing more than a few hay bales around. I could also just insert these guys as the male main character - only with Jay a bit taller like Walker at 6' 6", Strode at 6' 4", or Hartnett 6' 3". Anyway, five stars!

Great update!!! Can't wait for Barrett to get rid of Sarah--she's definitely no good.

This chapter was worth the wait! I wondered how Bar is going to react to Sarah's cheating? Though I have a feeling he knows something is up with her. I hope he decides to learn of his heritage too through Thelma, he can't base his heritage on his father alone because in that regard he is running too. I love that Renee is coming out of her shell a little and getting back to herself. Great update, can't wait for the next chapter

Perfect!!

Dang! Sarah is no good lol. Great chapter

I knew sarah was no good ! I don't think she'll clear out without a fight thou, I hope Renea strong enough for one more fight.

I hope Sarah get what's coming and I'm loving the story so far

You've sucked me in! Keep 'em coming!

You really have a way of drawing your readers into your world! I'm loving this story from start to now. I hope you take your time with this story. It's def a story with substance and has great potential to be a great novella. Keep up the good work!

Your writing flows like smooth honey............and so does your story!

More! More! More! That is all :)

I love the story!!!!!! Sarah gots to go. More!!!!!

I knew that ho was cheating with that dude at the store. Please tell Barrett Renee, he deserves to know. I am so glad now that Sarah can step aside and Renee can take her rightful place next to Barrett.

tells, then Sarah finds Terrill & brings him to Texas to scare her into running again? I would set it up for him to find them together on his own...

Barrett has to know something ain't right with Sarah with the way she dresses and helping out a guy with their job. I guess it isn't suspect that she doesn't want to help him with his business but she is willing to help another guy with his.

Renee need to definitely question Barrett without him catching on about him and Sarah or at least ask the guys.

Five.

Keep going please! Really liking this!

I knew Sarah was cheating on him. Makes me feel better that there is hope for Barrett and Renee. So what is the deal with the town flirt asking her out? Anyways Love it. Can't wait to see where this goes very well written.

I really like your style. Great story :)

Im Lovin this Story!!!!♡♥♡♥

I knew that ho Sarah couldn't be trusted!!

This is turning into something very interesting. Like it a lot.

The potential for this so enjoyable story is immense. Bravos. Reading on.

Good chapter!

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