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by bellefleure

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drmac100drmac100over 8 years ago
Excellent!

I love the way you write, so descriptive and erotic. Yes, FMB's are just a part of what fantasies are made of, and you explained it so well! I like your handle also. Very god story, very good job. I look forward to more from you.

Posy_ChurchgatePosy_Churchgateover 7 years ago
wowzer!

A great fantasy, deliciously wanton. Boots are my weakness!! Girl after my own heart.

Monkeys_pawMonkeys_pawover 1 year ago

Having tried to write a few stories as well on this site, I can really appreciate the descriptions, the setting of the scenes, the atmosphere, the buildup of tension… this is a real masterclass in erotic writing! I am taking a few lessons away from this story. Regards, Monkeys_paw

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