All Comments on 'Fable'

the story is sadistic and non-arousing.

This attempt left me cold and dry!

This is a really interesting piece. Well written

But I think this belongs in the 'Erotic Horror' category. It's a little off-beat from what one would normally read in the 'Nonhuman' section.

I'm sorry, but the prose was stiff, and the ending has it deserving of the title "Snuff". The entire story was rushed and there is little to no true interaction between the flat characters.

Nice try, but maybe practice a little more before posting.

The story was good. Never talk to strangers sort of way yes, but enjoyable. Snuff, HA, I think not.

WTF… wasn’t expecting that! Definitely should be under erotic horror