All Comments on 'Face (Sex, Power, Love) Ch. 30'

St-aaaahhhhhhhp. Please oh please for the love of whatever holds meaning in your life stop. Uncle! Uncle! Aunt, cousin, and assorted other relatives. Plenty of sex and power, woefully short on evidence of love or even basic human consideration. In your push to be hardcore you have lost any balance to the story, even given the strength of the intentional power imbalances.

So much time and effort that you have put in to write all 30 chapters........and it's all such drivel. What a shameful waste of your time, you could have been doing something actually productive.