All Comments on 'Face to face'

Great short story. Hubby is about to be attacked!

Very sexy. A combination of the possible forever and love with heated sex. You can't go wrong with that combo. Keep writing.

You are talented in writing you know that. I gave you an excellent score because you followed through nicely. As always it is difficult to pick apart your work. Some improvement could always be made in every story. The story was gentle, sexy, fun, and very beautiful.

Most important it could have happened!

This felt very real -- the characters' apprehensions are just as serious and as joyously overcome as in life. The story is truly romantic in how it sees this special time in the characters' lives.

This is a great story, and you write very well, describing the what and where. But who are these two people? How did they get to where the story begins?

Keep writing!

A very sweet, romantic, but sexy-as-hell love story!

Great story! Sexy and sweet ~

*Honey

and romantic.

I loved how you made Elvi so torn, slowly becoming more sure of herself.

Well done!

I liked this one. When I send my list (1st one, anyway) to Imp for the Anth., this one will be on it.

Q_C

Loved it!

Great story!!! Hope you will write more in the future.

Well written. You're very good at potraying the emotions of the characters. Good work!

good writing but the story was a bit short. wish to see even beter works in future.

Writing's not bad, but the plot was silly. There was no depth to these people. All there was, was the superficial. No hint as to how they got to this point. Obviously he came from a modest distance at least, and he wouldn't have done that without a good idea of who he was meeting. Yet there was the slam-bang-thank-you-ma'am aspect to this which was poorly presented. A guy doesn't get on a train and spend a chunk of change on the outrageous prices at a downtown hotel without having a better idea of what he was getting into. He expected jeans and a sweater? What nonsense. 2*