All Comments on 'Facebook Friend'

"chat and discourse"

They mean the same thing, you don't need both. Quite a few editing errors, and just plain boring. I got just past the point of her not liking his birthmark and stopped reading, didn't have a burning need to read about someone as shallow as 'Jane'.

But not what you'd call arousing.

because I thought the mention of his pictures showing only one side of his face was a giveaway to the rest of the story. Instead, I found a story about two "average" people, as in not the beautiful, big-breasted and well-endowed characters in so many other stories. I enjoyed the reluctant, yet natural, building of their appreciation for one another--all the things that had undoubtedly made them Facebook Friends--which in turn lead them to become sex partners, Facebook Boyfriend (and, I assume, Girlfriend,) and perhaps lovers. Thank you for the effort.