by RavishedDoe
However, wheres' the fun in that, unless you do break her and make her your slave!!
Sure wish I could have been there!
Can we make this into a video? Please..............
This was very sexy story!!! I really wish you would have described the smell of the girls ass and pussy though, that being part of the enjoyment of having a women sit on your face. You could write another episode and include that though, I would certainly be appreciative of that and I'm sure others would be too. Thanks for sharing this hot piece of fine work!!!
I enjoyed your dominance of your room mate. Hope you have more to the story as you break her into your will.
This is a seriously hot story. It should serve as an inspiration for anyone wanting to write in this genre. The only issue with the story was it was over too soon. I loved when she rubbed herself all over her roommates face.
That Viv's a malicious little scamp. I kinda wish she was MY roomate.
Great story!
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Well since you gave no chance for Cecilia to respond to Vivian's actions I'm going to assume she does something horribly violent to Vivian the next time she is asleep. Or immediately right after she says that final line.
I know what happens in the end. You know since this is a rape story she'll probably be sent to jail.
Maybe you should write a story about her trying to do that to one of the prison girls only to get beaten to a bloody pulp?
It wasn't an offened comment! It's just that... in jail there is all those girls. ;)
That was the hottest story I have ever read. On pure subject matter, naughtiness, and ability to deliver on your promise to entertain...a 10.
... and there's no indication of that.
I hate entitled, selfish people.
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