by AquaHolic0120
A very moving story, with deep and realistic emotions. Very enjoyable. Expertly written. I will return to read more by this author.
I really enjoyed this story... it was unhurried and yet enticing one to read on.
Thanks... I hope there's a sequel
Lovely descriptions of everything, including the girls body.
I do hope you pen a sequel.
Three people, a slow dance during the sorting out, until one dropped out of her own choosing, leaving the least likely pairing. Three people about whom we know almost nothing.
What happens next?
Well paced and easy to read. I do have a question about "Sisson" as the name of the man in story. Is it just one you randomly picked?
All of my characters are completely fictitious. The name you asked about was randomly chosen.
Fantastic piece as well as an insight in to the sometimes mature male mind
Thank you
Good piece of story telling. Hopefully there will be more explaining what happened during the remainder of the
it was fine,,fine, well written, more serendipitous,,not the eroticism i expected,,so much back story and very little sex.