All Comments on 'Fae War Ch. 01'

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Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 12 years ago
freaking cool

I just needed a little story fix before I head off to history class, and your story did it , although it was pretty short I enjoyed none the less. Hope you update really soon with a longer chapter ;)

I hope you stick around on Lit.

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
Nice Start

You have peek my interest and now I want to know more. Who is she, who is he? She could be the Queen and not know it yet, maybe? And what of him and his eyes, is he going to be friend or foe?

Please update soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Intrigued. Waiting for more.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
Chapter establishes a solid tone of intrigue

Can't wait to find out what awaits our heroine on the sandy beaches of South Carolina.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Good start. Erin sounds nice.

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