All Comments on 'Faerie, Magic, and Shifters, Oh my!'

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fatman1555fatman1555almost 8 years ago
Good story

but I would have loved to have seen some more build up to the whole scene.

Unless this was from another storyline?

FairytaleXXXFairytaleXXXalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Hello!

Dear fatman1555,

Hello, this is the author. :) Yes, this is part of an ongoing story line. But I tried to provide more depth in the next chapter. Any and all feedback about my story is appreciated. Thanks for taking the time to type something out. If you have any other thoughts, please feel free to leave more advice in this section.

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