by writingdirty
This story was nicely written and depict a relationship of interest, BUT for the erotic aspect for some reason I found it nether this nor that. It didn't engage and arouse me very much. (Maybe the detailed description of the woman informed me that she was not my type?)
Very nicely written. A couple of minor grammar misses. Very hot and somewhat believable story line that begs for the next adventure or new bet to see who comes out on top.
I was right there with you! It made my nuts ache! Very well written too.
Of course all readers are left wondering about if he fucks her next time. And of course you won’t tell us. “Pleasure denied is pleasure enhanced!”