All Comments on 'Fair Play'

by humminbean

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 15 years ago
very fine

A very fine and gentle story, paced and well-told. Thank you for showing that we older folk can still have emotions. And good sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent

How refreshing to find a story written by someone who obviously has real experience of life and literary ability to boot. Thank you, humminbean.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
A

real loving story,and that is becoming a rarity on this site nowadays.

WhiteWave48WhiteWave48over 15 years ago
What a find!

I so enjoyed this heartwarming story of two older people discovering each other - clearly written by someone who knows what he is doing in the bedroom. It's wonderful to come across a piece of masculine writing that radiates sexuality in a sensitive and highly personal way. The sex seemed real, not modified to suit a genre.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
True Love

Beautiful story about what True Love is all about, not just sex. The importance of pleasing and the many ways to satisfy your lover. You must continue with their relationship.

srgeeksrgeekalmost 15 years ago
Very Nice, Thank You

Said it all in the Title.

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LilacsAbloomLilacsAbloomalmost 13 years ago
Lovely.

Sweet and touching. Always a nice addition to eroticism.

AAA101AAA101over 12 years ago
Great Story

So good and understands the older folks perspective.

OleguyOleguyover 10 years ago
Pure talent.

Humminbean, you get right inside my psyche.

Top stuff !

HansTrimbleHansTrimbleover 2 years ago

Such an exquisite job of story telling--reading it was almost like being there!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awwww what a nice story! Thanks for sharing. :-)

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Been busy lately, but will try to post some new ones. Thanks again for your constructive comments! ------------------------------------ I've written a fair bit of non-fiction before, but these are my first tries at fiction. So far, I'm having a blast with it! Thanks t...

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