All Comments on 'Fairmont Motel'

What fun. I like the mystery about the woman, never finding out too much about her. Passion without romance is nice when done right, and here it's done right. bravo.

My wife and I read it together. We are really into role playing, so we will definately incorporate this sometime, we will probably go find a cheap motel, and act it out, go all out. thanks for the idea, and keep writing.

Ilove the excitement of this story- I too would love to act this out! Good job!

This may not have been THE most erotic story I have ever read in Literotica, but it MOST certainly was THE best-written. I envy your talent, as I am also a writer. The story flowed like maple syrup on a cold day in Vermont. It was rich, thick, and very satisfying. Don't ever stop writing. Just a suggestion on the ending. Wouldn't it have been a jolt to the reader if the heroine shot him afterward? Maybe someone had a contract out on him and she was a hit man. Anyway, I loved it as a piece of excellently written erotica. Jerry

the story is nice. It would be better if you make the ending longer.

I really enjoyed your interesting and well-written story. Usually, I prefer stories that are a little nastier and more explicit, but this was very arousing. It's a shame Romira and Tim have to go their separate ways because they seem like a good fit.

Best one i have ever read till this date.

The briefcase? Come ONNNNN!!!

Your little surprises are so artfully done...

but you're missing the obvious one?

Be nice...Give us what you've promised! :+)))

(Don't they have an Appointment With Destiny in Chicago? :+)))