All Comments on 'Faith Falls'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
very good story

So, did you marry her? Is there more to come? Hope so.

DwellerDarkDwellerDarkover 10 years agoAuthor
to Anonymous

The story is entirely fictional, but I like to think he married her. Thank you for the kind words!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Amazing story, I couldn't stop reading very well done

Belac77Belac77about 10 years ago
Well done!

So very well written and interesting! A bit predicable, perhaps, but other then that it is a great erotic short story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So, now what?

Four years later ......

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 8 years ago
Ah another one

Yes another story that leaves the poor reader hanging wondering what happened.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Real first love

Enjoyed the realistic emotions of first love and how a woman's love and acceptance can build a man up. 19A9

megantrojanmommegantrojanmomover 4 years ago
Love your stories

I love your writing, but please give us a happy ending

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