All Comments on 'Faithful Ch. 01'

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AhabscribeAhabscribeover 13 years ago
Spicy Start!

Delightful tease - looking forward to the next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very Good

As a stand alone story I thought it was just right, as infidelity goes. Too many husbands (and wive's) take their spouses for granted after awhile and typically allow their loving marital attitude to diminish and one or the other misses and craves love, respect and sexual fulfillment.

I enjoyed your story, by itself! I notice it was chapter 1 so, I'm definitely looking for chapter 2.

Thanks.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
Well done

Now that she has been naughty, where does she go from here?

Thanks for the well written story

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
By the title

I hope it doesn't turn into one of those storie's where the wife starts becoming more and more UNfaithful by the week. and more uncaring by the day. I really do hope this wife tries to stay Faithful...but...it doesn't look like it

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Why would a writer make such a big thing about the title of this story.

And then write about a woman that will almost certainly be un faithful. Why not just change the title? To "How a woman became unfaithful."

That would make more sense.

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
4****! Too short for 5*****.

But it was sexy and kind of hot.

norcal62norcal62over 12 years ago
Not sexy, not kind of hot.

Simply a fetish fantasy tale, and uninteresting.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 11 years ago
So What Do We Have Here

A cheating wife and an incestuous father and daughter. How wonderful.

DAMN

ramonbrookramonbrookover 10 years ago
You have got to be joking!

You stopped there!! A VERY HOT story and I felt like giving it a 5, but because of where you stopped I thought about giving you a 1.

Ended up giving you a 4!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Uh....wtf?

Ok, I really don't get it. This is an incest story, why in hell isn't it posted in that category? There's a time and place for sick and twisted shit....folks, this isn't it. Move the remarkably brief yet poorly written piece of crap to the proper place, please, I'm sure the voting will be much higher there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

now you have to get the husband involved.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Point

I really like a story with a point, something this one does not have.

MarkT63MarkT63over 3 years ago

Maybe chapter 2 will have a point?? This was just a slut wife story...

jcrjl2009jcrjl2009over 2 years ago

fantastic... where story 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Cheating is cheating

Where consequences?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another cheatng bitch!!

buzzsawlennybuzzsawlennyabout 1 year ago

So did this father start fucking his adopted stepdaughter before or after his wife croaked? Just smh.

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