by Nils Huim
What on earth did I just read and how do I turn back time to not read it?
This is a first class POS. Please don't write anymore.
was a waste of time to read, trash it and start over and get spell check and someone to edit for you. 1 star
I don't see what the other commenters are talking about. This was fairly well written though I'm not sure what the [sic] references were about. I think what some didn't like was that there were no explicit descriptions of sex acts.
John may have gotten a good deal of satisfaction from turning his brother-in-law in to the police but I doubt it did him any good with his wife who he seems to still love. I see a divorce in the near future. He's probably better off without her but a man with no dick still faces a life all alone, most likely.
The story wasn't my cup of tea, so to speak, but I saw no reason for the comment telling the author to stop writing. Believe it or not stories have been written in which sex isn't the main theme. Thanks for sharing.