All Comments on 'Fall of '69 Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
strange road

He is taking a strange road considering the trauma she went through. The bastards that raped her shouldn't go free, in fact their testicles should be handed to them in a jar of formalhyde., buth then again who says someone in love has common sense.

Good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
glad...

you continued the story. please keep on writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Twist

Very upsetting twist to an otherwise great story. To bad he didn't get to use the tire iron. I want to read more of their story. Hint, I do like a happy ending. My Becky was named Jeri. No happy ending to that story either.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
nice

I like this story and how it ends happy.

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