All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 02'

Quite like it.

when i read the first story, i thought the luma was too cold but i am liking him in the second story....please continue

Love how things are slowing changing for the better!

I'm glad Luma made the decision not to hurt any of the boys and is allowing them to fulfill their wishes with each other. I like this story.

this reminds me of the blood sucking british govenment.. blood sucking bastards.? this is like watching a political broadcast by the conservative party..no one believes the crap coming from there gobs. they just feel the life draining from them... i am on the 2nd of what looks like a very long drawn out story... i only hope i manage to stay focust in reading till the very end before i drop into a complete coma from utter bordom.

the last comment by that dick head dinkyboots about sums up my thoughts

Let me guess, the bath is where the pets go to sleep permanently? That was extremely well done.