by bob_socket
I can't believe I'm complaining because of too much sex on Literotica but the opening scenes held such promise and I was hoping for more dialog where the two connect on a deeper level. I'd like to see how you develop the Romance aspect.
Some of the scenes are really really good.
So many stories are just all about the sex with no plot. I like a story that has a good plot and builds the relationship. Just feel like the story isn't finished. Would like more.
This couple is having a dynamic getting to know each other phase. The knight in shining one weekend and then the nightingale next. And he has already been introduced to the parents! Good storyline, characters and fun.