All Comments on 'Falling for Fae Ch. 03-04'

Incredibly rushed story.

This was intended to be a short story. Ch. 3 will post soon and is the last part of this arc. Thanks for reading, and please share your thoughts.

The deal with the professor just seems like a superfluous plot device to get her to the surface and makes her seem like a bit of an airhead. How do we know she's actually sure about Warren now? It seems like you could have given her an adventurous spirit who wanted to live as a human and not have bothered with the vestigial plot of the professor

I wish I had thought of that. It's a great premise. Thank you for sharing the idea. Thank you for reading.

After his behavior in the first two chapters, I pretty much figured out the Prof was not Rhy's mate. I dunno how she could have been so wrong and wonder what she ever saw in him. But any residual doubt was shattered when he tried to have sex with her - in school on a day he wasn't scheduled to be there. What could he have been thinking? I know Rhy was leading him on, but if he was caught, he'd be fired, possibly arrested - seems to me no professor would think of sex with a student in those circumstances. I understand why the King and Gus wanted Felicity and Rhy away from the battle with Roedan (especially since he just hurt her) but part of me wished for poetic justice that Felicity killed Roedan. Ah well, he's gone for good so everyone else can get on with their lives. Hurray!

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I hope I'm not the only one who wondered where the professor went when Felicity came into the room; he had no dialogue and wasn't mentioned at all afterwards. I wanted to see his reaction after she left, but it was a little bit choppy and hard to read. Other than that I like the characterisation and the ideas.