by keptbyfather
He never got his phone back and he forgave him so easily. Not on board
There were some black holes...like never trying to get his phone back, and never seeing Pete for a whole year while going to the same school, but all in all it was a fun story.
I loved that story. Very sexy and very romantic.
You are a very good writer - with the exception of your misuse of personal pronouns.
Master your personal pronouns (Its very easy!) and you will be a great writer - not just a good one.
Keep writing!
"Its" is possessive, "It's" is a contraction for "it is". "(Its very easy!)"
The type of story I enjoy and much better than just sex, sex and more sex!!!
They made up to fast, the son stole his phone from him, and he never recovered the property, plus the father shouldn't have been so ducking awful. Forgiveness is not that easy when you realize the one you want can and will lie to you and rip your heart out so easily. It breaks trust that takes time to rebuild. So I'm not buying it.
Looks like Ted and Rob have their "happy ever after" and they really deserve it! Love their "reunion" and the sex that flows from that. Love their sexy descriptions -- Ted's hairy chest and swollen cock, and their trading loads of cum with each other. It is really, love and it's so wonderful!
This is one of my favorite stories on this site. Would love to revisit these characters
Great story, but on this last page when they make love, a fantastic opportunity was missed by not describing it. While the love story continues, it just sort of jumps past that part and ends the story.