All Comments on 'Falling for His Father Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I can't believe

He never got his phone back and he forgave him so easily. Not on board

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I like it

There were some black holes...like never trying to get his phone back, and never seeing Pete for a whole year while going to the same school, but all in all it was a fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Almost Perfect

I loved that story. Very sexy and very romantic.

You are a very good writer - with the exception of your misuse of personal pronouns.

Master your personal pronouns (Its very easy!) and you will be a great writer - not just a good one.

Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
To Almost Perfect...

"Its" is possessive, "It's" is a contraction for "it is". "(Its very easy!)"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Excellent story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

i loved this story :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Excellent

The type of story I enjoy and much better than just sex, sex and more sex!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I'm sorry, but no

They made up to fast, the son stole his phone from him, and he never recovered the property, plus the father shouldn't have been so ducking awful. Forgiveness is not that easy when you realize the one you want can and will lie to you and rip your heart out so easily. It breaks trust that takes time to rebuild. So I'm not buying it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Wonderful and Happy

Looks like Ted and Rob have their "happy ever after" and they really deserve it! Love their "reunion" and the sex that flows from that. Love their sexy descriptions -- Ted's hairy chest and swollen cock, and their trading loads of cum with each other. It is really, love and it's so wonderful!

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

This is true Erotica. Five Stars.

Auspat2121Auspat2121over 2 years ago

Great story well written. Thank you.

semenloversemenloverover 1 year ago

A very happy ending, indeed. The world needs a lot of these.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is one of my favorite stories on this site. Would love to revisit these characters

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fantastically well written - tender , yet erotic

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great story, but on this last page when they make love, a fantastic opportunity was missed by not describing it. While the love story continues, it just sort of jumps past that part and ends the story.

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