All Comments on 'Falling for Matthew Ch. 04'

I LIKE HOW THIS SERIES DOESN'T JUMP RIGHT INTO THE SEX SO SOON, BUT WE NEED MORE THAN ONE OR TWO PAGES. ESPECIALLY SINCE YOU DON'T WRITE NEW ONES FOR QUITE A WHILE. I NEED MORE TO LOOK FORWARD TO.

It's good, it's just slow! Longer chapters, maybe? Or chapters more often? :-)

I really do like your work and feel your work portrays a the norm in the lives of those write of. I really like that you don't just jump to sex scenes. However, you are keeping us in serious suspense and the chapters are pretty short...can't wait to read more.

Don't stop!!! More! More! It's getting really, really good for you to leave us hanging with one page?? Please continue; I don't want to be disappointed with yet another unfinished work on this site.

I agree with the others, we want MORE!!!

Love this story, I've been checking all the time for new chapters.

But ONE page?!

Anyway. Glad to hear it all worked out ok with Jane. Hope the story isn't losing momentum and there's something good coming up. So excited for the bit where they finally get together (they do get together, right?).

This is probably one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica! I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Jake was great with how he handled that situation with Jane especially given his age. He's a good guy. Its funny neither Matt & Jake didn't correct the doctor about them dating. I love this story & can not wait for the next chapter.

I love this story but I would love to see things move a little faster pls. And if the chapters could be longer.thanks

Real Life does not tend to be extra accomodating because one rights stories for a dirty little web site.....;).......... . Jake and Jane handled that rather well. Will Matt think that Jake pulling his hand back like that as a rejection? You planning to make us cry with the CT scan, aren't you?

I really enjoy this story, and currently have a situation like this, so I am curious to see how the situation ends up!

it was a really sweet chapter.

it is sad to see how matt is so alone... if he is attracted to Jake i wonder how it started, and why he keeps himself from other people.

hope to read another update soon :)

I'm really sorry for keeping you in suspense like this, but I'm currently working two jobs so it's pretty difficult to sit down and write a proper chapter for you. Hoping to finish up this story pretty soon though, so hang in there!

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, it makes it all worthwhile!

This is a great chapter! I can't wait to see how you continue the story. Thank you for writing such a relatable story!

I AM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER YAAAAY

MORE!! Pretty please I can't wait till the next chapter c:

Come on give us another chapter!!!:)

I just love the characters, the situations you put them through, their struggles, and the way you tell the story. Although my life story is so different, I find myself identifying with much of what they are going through.

Yes, I'm having hard time waiting for the next chapter as well as the other readers, but please please please take your time and keep the high standard of your work. This story is really superb, maybe the best erotic story I read, and I would hate to see the end is any less good only because it was expedited.

This is an amazing story. I really hope you make more chapters soon because I hate not being able to know what is going to happen next.

More please! Please?

Please! Need more now!!! This is such a good story!

more please :)

awwww this is so sweet!

Please post more super soon!!!

more...please??

This story is too good not to have a happy ending, we need more!

Love, love, loving this storyline! Please keep it coming!

... with this story! Hope to see ch. 5 soon.

Love this story, eagerly anticipating it's continuation!

Great read, keep on writing! Can't wait for Jake and Matt to finally end up happily ever after!

So good but why are they all so short?!

more please